Writing interesting sentences!
WALT: Add detail to our sentences to give detail to the reader.
Today Mrs Clark gave us an example of what detailed sentences look like in 5 simple steps.1st, we added an adjective.2nd, we told the reader when.3rd, we told them where.4th,we added how.5th,we put why.Afterwards,she gave us the choice of a simple sentence and then using the 5 steps to make it detailed.This is my sentence:
I waited for the bus.
I waited unhappily for the
bus.
This afternoon I waited unhappily for the bus.
This afternoon I waited unhappily for the bus at the bustop.
This afternoon I unhappily shivered waiting for the bus at the bustop.
This afternoon I unhappily shivered waiting for the bus at the bustop because there was a breakdown.
That is what I wrote.
How detailed a sentence can you make?
Thanks for reading!
