Friday 14 September 2018

Show Not Tell



WALT: We are learning to show not tell and to describe.

This week in literacy we have been looking at descriptive writing and how to show not tell.
I enjoyed this because I love making up sentences. Do you like it?
You  should try making up sentences like this. I like how it's a mystery. We had to not tell that the cat was angry. We had to express it.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Emily Its Bailee here,

    I really like your blog post about 'show not tell!'
    I think its a really good topic to learn about.
    Maybe next time you could Make the writing a bit easier to read by changing the font.
    Except for that this is a great blog post, I cant wait to see more of your very hard work
    Good job Emily, From Bailee :)

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